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Review over Night Shadows by Stephen L. Brayton

posted by Moissanite Jewel
Thursday July 21, 2011

 

Title: Night Shadows

Author: Stephen L. Brayton
Author’s Website: Stephen Brayton
His publisher’s site: http://www.echelonpress.com/

Des Moines Homicide detective Harry Reznik and F.B.I. agent, Lori Campisi, have their hands more than a little full when they team up to investigate a series of gruesome murders.

With life throwing them one obstacle after another, the unlikely pair has no choice but to put their personal issues aside as they battle malevolent creatures from another dimension. With everything to lose, they have no one but each other to count on in a wicked game of survival.

 

 


Night Shadows delivers a beautiful but bone chilling experience.

Night Shadows. Go ahead and say it in a whisper…Night Shadows. Add some spooky music from a horror movie and you’ve got it. Night Shadows will make you turn the lights on as you read this. You may have to actually break it up into nights depending on your nerve.

This is the first horror book I’ve reviewed on the site. There was more gore in here than I particularly like, which lowered the score a little. However, I did get over it though as the creepiness I sought was here. Oh wow. You know how it can be tough to find horror shows that are more spooky than gorey these days? I watch a lot of Japanese horror to get the creepy feeling I crave that I can’t get from American horror anymore.

This. Was. It. Night Shadows gave chills up my spine, it was like watching a good ol’ fashioned horror movie that was more about actual fright. I knew the first day I read it I would enjoy this story immensely. The main MC’s, Harry Reznick and Lori Campisi make a great team. Lori’s past, okay, pretty predictable, I knew who she was. I don’t think the author was trying to surprise us, I think it was more about the wait for her to find herself.

Harry has some real problems in the book, but I’m not going to discuss them because of spoilers.

Although graphic, the language in here isn’t so bad. The F word never appears, and most of the language is marked with abbreviations such as H. or B.S. and such. I enjoyed that fact, and when real language appeared it was warranted. This improved the book immensely to me.

As a side note, the editing for this book was superb.

When you read this book, you will feel like you’re reading a movie, trust me. Although our MC’s are Reznik and Campisi, the author will whisk you away into a new POV and a new character that will not appear again. Like those extra scenes in a horror movie, it’s those throwaway characters. However, he does more than slice and dice. He shares background, he shares description, and he makes you feel for these characters making their last horrifying moments so much more memorable.

The ending was okay. I did love the part with the professor (spoilers), but I wanted more of Reznik and Campisi. I wanted a bit more of a resolve, especially for Reznik’s wife. Throughout the story, I was made to feel for her, and I felt a little upended by her ending. Not a happily ever after I was looking for, but something more.

Other than that, I really loved this book. Night Shadows delivers a beautiful but bone chilling experience.
I give it 4 stars, but others who read it who tolerate more gore would probably give it 5 stars.


You enjoy horror
You enjoy a good horror story with some gore
You like detectives with a real world touch
You don’t mind some language, but would like it toned down.
You enjoy stories with few editing mistakes
You like more medium length stories instead of short. From my reading, I estimate it was more than 200 pages. Probably around 300-400.
Obviously, this book is not for children and it does have some horror in it. It might be for more advanced young adults, but I have no problem saying this is definitely for adults with the degree of graphic violence.




*I got a copy from the author in exchange for a review.

Interview with Stephen Brayton, Author of Night Shadows

posted by Moissanite Jewel
Thursday July 21, 2011

I would like you all to meet Stephen Brayton. He has got one heck of a book he has shared with us (4 stars, see review). It certainly didn’t take seven days to know his book was good. So let’s move onto the interview, and please stay in your seats until it’s done. There is nothing in that shadow behind you, I promise…

 

1. Has anyone confessed to turning on the lights more to read Night Shadows?

Most people have commented how they either had to turn the light on when they slept or had to wait until someone else returned home. I think books are a little bit more enjoyable when they give you an ‘after’ feeling, either a shiver or looking at the world in a different way.

No kidding, I shivered a couple times. Okay, not really, but I got goosebumps and that’s the truth.

 

2. Night Shadows was a fascinating book. I liked Harry Reznik and Lori Campisi. Did you base these characters out of your head, or did you base some aspects on real people?

A little of both. When the idea started forming, the two main characters were fairly easy to write. In fact, I didn’t have any problems with names or general personalities. Once I had a story outline, the aspects and quirks of each character pretty much fell into place.

 

3. You have tamed down Night Shadows using cussing as H. or B.S. and others, yet it was still very graphic in nature, and it did have some cussing in intense moments without abbreviations. Tell me, why did you do that? Was it to show the extremity of the situation? Did you feel not abbreviating most of the cussing to be a more proper thing to do? Or do you yourself talk this way? I’m eager to know because I haven’t read a book that did this before!

Every time I write a story I think about the amount of profanity I want to include. I’ve read books written in the earliest part of the 20th century through present day and I enjoy seeing how language changes, what words and phrases were accepted then and now aren’t. With movies and many police procedurals and thrillers, profanity is common. However, I don’t think a lot of it is necessary. With Night Shadow’s medical examiner using initials for profanity, I just wanted an extra quirk to make him a little different. With Reznik, I think he would use profanity, but not excessively. I also try not to use anything too harsh unless there is no other alternative. For instance, you don’t see the F word in this story. I just don’t like it and try not to use it. In my upcoming book, Beta, I use it, I think once, but the situation was extreme and intense enough to warrant the word.

 

4. Did you know the ending before you started Night Shadows, or did you write and let your imagination soar?

No, I outline. I knew the ending. I plotted each scene and flashback. Unfortunately, my editor told me to chop off about 4000 words-basically the last couple chapters. I had already provided an explanation and didn’t need the extra. So, I trimmed the excess, but basically it’s the same ending as I envisioned.

 

5. Horror and Mystery are definitely your genres. If you ever thought of expanding your genres, what else would you like to try?

I’ve written an action mystery and am working on a thriller and started (egad!)a romance.

Strangely, I would pick up a Romance. The chemistry achieved while not intentionally writing romance so far is unbelievable in Night Shadows.

 

6. Have you ever thought of writing a series?

I plan to have Reznik and Campisi come back in more stories. I’ve been working on the sequel to Night Shadows for awhile and although I’m enthused about the concept, I’m not happy with the shape it’s become and I need to tinker with it a little. With my upcoming book, I’ve already completed its sequel and would like it to continue as a series.

 

7. Throughout your books, you’ve probably had reviews from other reviewers as well as author critiquers before your books finish. Tell us! Out of every review you ever got, is there one that stands out in your head as the most impressive to you?

I cherish everyone’s comments and thank them for reading my book. One of my dad’s friends liked it although he said I didn’t go far enough in the scene near the beginning with the couple in the park. He wanted more sex. Lol. Also, the mother of a writer friend also has enjoyed the book, even though the genre is not what she usually reads. So, I like that people can try something new.

 

8. Hey, you’re a book blogger too on Brayton’s Buzz. What’s the best book you think so far that you’ve actually read on your own site?

Well, I gave The Judas Gate by Bill Myers a black belt ranking but I likedAdrenaline by Jeff Abbott because he left me wanting more.

 

9. What do you think is the future for books? Everyone has their own opinion, but I’d love to hear what you think. I am an eBook reader, as you can tell. Are ereaders here to stay? Are they the death of publishing, or are they kindling something new and different?

In the past, writers went through publishing houses and agents. So when a book was published, you could be reasonably certain it might be a fairly decent book. With indie presses on the rise writers have a better opportunity to get published. But, with those, the author has to spend a little more time marketing. Now, with anybody able to write something, upload it, and sell it for whatever someone else will pay for it there is more of a challenge for serious writers to be noticed. You have to have a plan, and be willing to do what is necessary. I think what call ‘tangible’ books will continue to be published, but technology will continue to make it easier for writers and readers to put their stuff out there.

 

10. I took a quiz and it told me I write like H.P. Lovecraft (which coincidentally appeared in Night Shadows!) In your opinion, who do you think you write like? Do you feel like there was a special author you read that influenced your writing, or has anyone told you that you write like someone they’ve read before?

Lovecraft rules! I’ve enjoyed Lovecraft and Machen and Smith for years. Something about the mythos grabbed hold and I still try to pick up stories I haven’t read. I knew when I started Night Shadows I wanted to, if not parallel them, at least strike a familiar chord. I hope I write like me, if that makes sense. I don’t mind being compared to others, or if someone would someday put me in the same field or class as the masters, but I have to write in my style because copying looks like a copy.

 

11. You’ve got a second book called Beta coming out soon, so you need to tell us about this one.

Is it going to be an old fashioned detective story? A Horror, supernatural again or is it more about the adventure and action?

 

Mallory Petersen is a six foot blonde private investigator and martial arts instructor. Many of her cases tend to lean toward the nuttier side, however in Beta, she accepts a case to find a kidnapped eight year old girl. Using both her investigator and taekwondo skills, she finds herself encountering the dark underworld of child pornography. It’s an action mystery with serious issues tempered by humorous scenes.

 

12. You are a Taekwondo teacher. Do your students know you are actually an author too, or is it something you keep to yourself, like a bottled up special secret? Do you know if any of them have actually bought your book?

I’ve mentioned the books to them and a few of them have read Night Shadows. I’ve told a few martial arts friends at various tournaments, especially about Beta. I even had a feature regarding the upcoming book in my organization’s magazine which is distributed both nationally and abroad.

 

13. When does your new book Beta come out, and who do think is its target audience? Who should be adding it to the cart on the first day it comes out?

October first is the scheduled release date and I have one instructor who probably will be the first to download it the minute it’s published. I hope anybody who enjoys a good action oriented mystery will give this one a read. Of course, I hope martial artists will enjoy it because even though I don’t specifically mention my organization, I basically have Mallory’s school a member of it. I hope I’ve stayed true to my training in the techniques she uses. It is definitely not for children because of the subject matter. As I mentioned above, I’ve used profanity where needed, however, I’ve kept the graphic descriptions to a minimum. Readers will understand what is going on without me providing explicit details. I hope I’ve also shown Mallory’s caring and humanity in how she deals with this case.

 

Exciting. I wish you luck on your newest release and the success of Night Shadows. (I am personally looking forward to more of Campisi and Reznik.) Thank you very much Stephen Brayton for stopping by the site.

 

Review over Dragon Stones by Kristian Alva

posted by Moissanite Jewel
Wednesday July 13, 2011

 

Title: Dragon Stones: Book 1 of The Dragon Stone Saga

Author: Kristian Alva
Author’s Website: Kristian Alva

Sequestered deep in the capital, the tyrannical Emperor Vosper weaves a plan to destroy all the dragons. He succeeds in driving them to the very brink of extinction. Only a handful of dragons and riders remain; living in exile in the desert.
When young Elias Dorgumir finds a carved dragon stone in the forest, it brings empire soldiers to his doorstep, and puts Elias on the run with a bounty on his head.

Is Elias strong enough to halt the evil that is spreading across the land?

 


Fantasy is my thing, so I was pleased when I got the chance to review Dragon Stones. This book? Well, I don’t know what to say, I really don’t. I don’t want to say fantastic or awesome, the words don’t have enough meaning. From the start Kristian Alva emerges us into her world. She doesn’t info dump or expect us to pick everything up at once. We start simply, with some people slaying dragons in the intro. Then we leave this scene to our main MC, a 15 year old named Alias and his grandmother Carina. Quaint, some description, quite comfortable. I would say I thought it would be something like a modern Lord of the Rings book.

It’s more than Lord of the Rings, this has a lot of that special zing I loved from Harry Potter in it. After Elias finds a Dragon Stone, some history is revealed through his grandmother to him. He doesn’t heed her advice, and terrible things occur which start the adventure the reader awaits. We also start to switch off to the King Mitca and his Dragon Riders, to see what’s going on on the other side of the coin.

It was a little annoying the first time we switched, as I really like staying with a character if I stay with them for so many chapters, but sometimes it can’t be helped. Secrets are revealed, little by little as we begin to travel with the character and his new companion. Even at the very end of the book, the last words reveal a gigantic secret that just made me go ‘AHH?!’

And then it ended.

A part of me hates the fact I read it because I can’t read the second one yet. Hopefully, it comes out soon, I really want it. This book made me cry and ‘feel’ in a good way. I haven’t felt such an old fashioned tug from a book in a long time like this one had on me. I had to finish reading it, and I wanted to buy the second one which is why I wanted to pin myself in ’til Friday reading this series. Unfortunately, there’s not even a second. Yet. (Dangit.)

The editing is well done, a couple of goofups but nothing major that made me lose the flow of the story. I wish the story were longer, it was only a little over 200 pages (around 40,000-45,000 words I estimate). I wanted this thing to be at least 800 pages.

This gets a solid 5 from me!


Want a classic fantasy that is refreshing and different in the same time
Want books around 200 pages, not real short but not long
Like Dragons
Like magic
Are looking for a heart beating adventure.
Like books that have some violence, but doesn’t have any bad language in it.
 


*I got a copy from the author in exchange for a review.

Review of two John H. Carroll books

posted by Moissanite Jewel
Thursday July 7, 2011

 

Title: The Emo Bunny That Should-A Story for Demented Children

Author: John H. Carrol

This is a SHORT STORY approximately 2875 words long, which translates to about 15 printed pages.

Emo the Bunny was a sad bunny. He preferred gloomy days, walks over a cliff and misery of any sort.

One day he saw something very unusual. Normally he’d take a nap and try to forget about it, but for some reason he took an interest.

Ducks, bunnies, chickens, squirrels, bears, cows, robins and plague rats all play a part in the disturbing events which show that woodland creatures aren’t always as cute, fuzzy and innocent as they lead us to believe!

Emilie the Autumn Bunny and her Plague Rats make a guest appearance.

Caution: This story is not for normal children. If you have any intention of raising a well adjusted child, this is not the right tale for you.

 

 


Having listened to ‘Go the **** to Sleep’ I thought this would be a great read to read next. However, it’s not as great as I thought it was going to be as I found it on my Kindle. Turns out it’s not even .99, it’s free now on Amazon. Which is probably a good thing right now. The story was written for children but not meant for Children. Kind of like Uncle Shelby’s ABZ’s by Shel Silverstein. (Highly recommended, I’ve owned and loved this book for years on end.)

What I like about this book: It’s a little funny. It’s unique.

What I don’t like about this book: It doesn’t feel like it was written for children or adults. For adults, their isn’t enough characterization developed to get in touch with the characters. Only Emo is the one you learn about, and he isn’t someone you get really attached to personally. For children, the story needed less oomph. Although there wasn’t enough development for adults, there was overdevelopment for children. The story itself at over 4,000 words could have been cut down to 1,000 words or even less, and it would have made a bigger impact to me. It also really needed pictures, badly. Kids’ stories may not be developed, but they have beautiful illustrations associated with them.

Personally, I think if there had been some professional illustration, along with shortening the word length, he might have actually found a great success with this book. Unfortunately, I am almost a hundred percent sure this is a gateway book into his other books.

Does it work though?

Even though it only scored two stars, it has made me want to read more of his free works. If they get better, then I will probably end up trying his longer and priced books. I know I wouldn’t have paid Amazon for this piece though, so I’m glad I grabbed it while it was free. For now though, I wouldn’t jump from this little story to a $2.99 purchase just yet. However, I really want to try Don’t Change. That sounds like a good creepy one.:)

 

People who like short stories
People who won’t read it to children.
People who enjoy reading goth characters. (Emo the bunny is of course, Emo.)
People who don’t mind seeing the Easter Bunny as a bad guy.

 


*I got it as a freebie off Amazon and I wanted to see if it would make me consider his paid titles.

On to the Second Review.

Title: Zachary Zombie and the Lost Boy-A Story for Demented Children

Author: John H. Carrol

Zachary is the personal zombie of Gert the Wicked Witch. She sent him to fetch newts from the forest. Along the way, he finds a lost boy named Tobias who had been following an emo bunny in the hopes of holding it and making it feel better. When the boy asks nicely for help getting to his home in the village, Zachary agrees.

Along the way, they run into a cranky stag and a pretty woman who dreams of meeting a prince. A party in the cemetery isn’t the proper place to take a boy, but zombies aren’t always proper and one of the worst things about villagers is that they always seem to have a supply of pitchforks and torches.

Will the boy make it home? Will Zachary give in to the craving for brainsss?

Caution: This story is not for normal children. If you have any intention of raising a well adjusted child, this is not the right tale for you.

 

 


Vlog review is above in Emo the Bunny. Zachary Zombie is in the second section.

I really didn’t know if I wanted to try another book, but I really wanted to test the free book gateway theory. So even though The Emo Bunny That Should wasn’t my piece of pie, I decided to keep going. I’m glad I did! Now reading Zachary Zombie, I am considering becoming a fan of this author and seeing his longer priced works.

I loved all of it. I love the way it concentrates on the importance of the word please in the story like six times! It kept making me giggle. I mean, Tobias our lost little boy is talking and interacting with a Zombie. I really don’t think saying ‘please’ is the real focus for a kid. Of course, this book wasn’t made for kids, just like his other book I read. I also loved the fact he tied in emo bunnies too, that part was kind of a nod to Emo The Bunny That Should.

This book hits it harder though, I don’t know why but I enjoy it much more. I feel like I care about the little relationship between Zachary and Tobias, they created a bond, as weird as that sounds. He still has a whole lot of humor in here, over the top humor like a beautiful girl waiting for her prince charming. (but way more than that, he makes things crystal clear around her and about her.)

 

The ending is neither sad nor good, just a simple question answered and preparing to move on.

Anyone who wants a really good funny zombie book.
Those who like zombies
Anyone who likes short books.
Those who like books created to resemble books for children, but aren’t.

 


*I got it as a freebie off Amazon and I wanted to see if it would make me consider his paid titles.

It’s Follow Friday

posted by Moissanite Jewel
Friday July 1, 2011

I just joined It’s Follow Friday. This looks like one big blog hop, so hope someone still stops by.

Q. ACK! Your favorite book/movie character (example Hermione Granger played by the Emma chick) just walked into the room! Who is it and what would be your first reaction? You get extra points if you include visual stimulation.

My favorite TV/Book/Movie character is no surprise (for those who follow this blog should know), it’d be the Doctor! My reaction? I would probably stare, blink and stare. Wait for his first move and hope I get to be his next companion in his Tardis! It also depends on which one it is. Hartnell was to say, a little more grouchier than the later ones, but if he treated me more like a grandfather did instead of being such a grouch, I’d be more keen.

If it’s Jon Pertwee or Tom Baker he’d have to drag me away.:)

Tom Baker would be choking because that scarf would be my target.^^

Book Blogger Hop

Book Blogger Hop is a similar hope where we all find new blogs to follow and new friends to meet!

Q: “What keeps you reading beyond the first few pages of a book, and what makes you want to stop reading a book and put it back on the shelf?“

I don’t know, I just have to feel hooked. If it’s drowning in description and I reach page three without a single name of a character, I usually don’t want to continue. It’s just gotta have something appealing in there, that ‘grab factor’. And as for the give up, it’s because I realized the book was something I didn’t want. Like there was no description of vampires, but then suddenly, ‘oh look, there they are?’. Nope. Also when the plot doesn’t seem to be moving at all. I like character dialogue but if we’re still eating lunch sandwiches with two characters and no excitement for two chapters, there’s no way I’ll finish it. Also, the way it’s written too. Can’t stand books that are written about back in B.C., but are spoken like by line like they are written from the B.C. It’s basically like reading the bible. The bible was written back then, so I don’t mind reading it, but ‘do ye know not what ye hath done to thou story?’ Those don’t appeal to me at all.